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Fri 6 Jun, 2003 04:56 pm
Strong, eager hands
caressing my
wanting soul.
My body, hot,
in rhythm
with his.
Our souls,
intertwined,
empowering,
one another,
becoming one.
To the deepest
most sacred
part of me,
I feel his warmth.
Even though,
I do not know
what tomorrow
holds, I know
tonight, I'll
become whole.
(Hi everyone, I would, deeply, appreciate any feedback. Thanks so much!!)
Lovely Raveneye- well written.
A wedding night??
Welcome to A2k.
beautiful poem raven.I flows nicely.
i like the way u used your soulz as the main point of contact in making luv.
Hi rayray,
I appreciate your kind thoughts. They bring a smile to my face!!
~Raven Eye~
Hi Jackie,
Thanks for your nice comment about my poem. I appreciate it very much!
Thanks for the welcome!!
Bye,
~RavenEye~
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