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Sat 31 May, 2003 11:05 am
I'm starting with writing some stuff and this is a poem/song that I wrote that I like. If anyone has some suggestions on things that would be great.
-=Choices=-
I came upon the fork in the road
and don't know where to go.
Both roads are tempting but
I lost my map along time ago.
Which will be the better choice
just give me a sign to show me which
is the right choice and I'll go
The choices are too many and
the stakes are too high to lose.
I don't know where to go or which
one I should choose
Will I have the guts to even make a choice
or will I just stand here and rot away.
I had better make a choice
or road will never get paved.
and I'll be stuck here with nowhere to go.
The choices are too many and
the stakes are too high to lose.
I don't know where to go or which
one I should choose.
I thought it was nice.
Very similar to The Road Less Travelled, which is one of my favorites.
Thanks Phoenix, this place seems kind of cool to try out some of my stuff and get some feedback.