Tue 3 Jun, 2003 05:22 pm - Yeah I got self mutilation out of this poem. I know all too well about this topic and so I really like your poem. It's well put together and I can see the person in the night doing this to... (view)
Tue 3 Jun, 2003 05:08 pm - I really liked this poem. It got a little creepy but it was really good insight on to people who bottle things up. The imagry was really good and I could see the person you were talking about. (view)
Tue 3 Jun, 2003 04:57 pm - I think just about everyone here is right. For me I hate it when people try to be critical about grammer and English usage in poetry because that's not what poetry is about. I think if a... (view)
Sat 31 May, 2003 11:05 am - I'm starting with writing some stuff and this is a poem/song that I wrote that I like. If anyone has some suggestions on things that would be great.
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I came upon the fork in... (view)
