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Oblivion

 
 
Reply Tue 27 May, 2003 01:03 am
Heaven won't allow this dark soul
Nirvana turned my regretful heart away cold
Out of the dirt
Sent back to the surface
reached heaven's gate
They said this isn't your fate

I'm bleeding my soul
gashed to the bone
This is where I go
When I feel this alone

Light conquers dark
but never washes away a shadow
Stays with you forever
never letting go
never letting you forget
It's eternal hold

Heaven doesn't have shadows
Nirvana doesn't have misery
Here is where I crawl
When my shadow overwhelms me
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Reply Tue 27 May, 2003 01:55 pm
I'm not a big fan of what I call the "rythym" of the poem but the last line is great!
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Reply Wed 28 May, 2003 02:09 am
thank you
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