Wed 20 Apr, 2005 09:02 am - I loved it man. I think I get your meaning. I took it as more of a dark tragedy. I mean you can only use the words kill, die, death, and murder so many times before it becomes a bit dark eh? :)... (view)
Fri 24 Oct, 2003 12:47 am - My legs have failed
As I kneel for help
Destroy myself again
No I will never let you in
See whats cool and close to me
Be my viper and my seed
Nothing here to be said
Something sad and... (view)
Tue 14 Oct, 2003 08:13 pm - another one......any suggestions?
They call my name
to them i run
come along into this song
right or wrong does not exist
limitless pain for infinite bliss
I need you here tonight
I need... (view)
Tue 14 Oct, 2003 12:16 am - There's something sad in her walk
There's something blue in the way she moves
There's something wrong in her soul
something wicked in it's flow
Where she goes what she... (view)
Tue 23 Sep, 2003 01:25 am - I apologize i'm to tired to read all that. Robert E Lee, Jackson, Beauregard, cleburne and others were great generals. HOwever through my readings I agree with your assertion that in general... (view)
Tue 23 Sep, 2003 01:19 am - hhhmmm....I'm clearly not very good at this game but i'd still like to enter my own. It should be easy enough.
"I'm on warm milk and laxatives
Cherry-flavored antacids" (view)
Tue 23 Sep, 2003 01:15 am - just a quick side note. When I write I try to be as blunt as I can without sounding like a 10 year old. To put across raw emotion i dont think it's best to wrap it up into a complicated... (view)
Mon 22 Sep, 2003 11:39 pm - i really liked your poem. I took it as you were in a horrible situation, you started to get better through hard work but now you feel yourself falling again. I can relate to that and i thought... (view)
