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Sun 23 Apr, 2006 01:26 pm
It was a beautiful day when I was born,
On a sunny and warm December morn,
The grass it was so green, so low,
The land was lush in Mexico;
The kind man held me in his arms,
Giving me confidence with all his charms,
He plays with me now I can walk,
Making me happy with his talk;
Water and food were both abundant,
To all I received, I became respondent,
Each day they fed me much, much more,
Then mentioned names they claimed I would gore;
Each day that passes I become stronger,
Sunshine and warmth became much longer,
Then the games began each day,
Chase them around with cloaks of grey,
Each one flapping as if in a breeze,
Were to me a simple tease;
Oh what joy I had in running,
Watch them jump when I was coming,
Running around in and out,
Listen them laugh, listen them shout;
So much more there was to learn,
How to twist at every turn,
Knock them down, I'm sorry friend,
Please don't stop this daily trend;
So much I look forward to,
And always a reward, I get from you,
A tasty morsel, squeeze me tight,
I would lick you, if I might;
Days are full of so much pleasure,
Chase the capes, I'm getting better,
So much pleasure they give me,
Applauding my virility;
Strong am I, and gentle too,
Never would this bull harm you,
So you roar and shout 'Ole'
You really like to watch me play;
One day I climb a timber ramp
Straw is dirty, straw is damp,
Shaking down a dusty road,
I feel this is an overload;
Crowds of people moving too,
Are we heading for the zoo,
Insecure and contemplating,
This journey is long, and what is waiting?
Into strange ground I am released,
Strangers hold me with a leash,
Yet why do they pull at me so,
Humans are kind, this I know;
Down a tunnel I must go,
Ouch! that was a painful blow,
Blood is seeping out of me,
A dagger in my side I see;
I come up to a wooden door,
It opens, I run out, to score?
Capes I see to play with me,
Men around to tease me, see ;
Sandy ground and cheers Ole
There are thousands here to watch me play,
Six of them wave capes at me,
I will chase them, you will see;
One I catch, excitedly,
I did not mean to hurt him though,
I will stand still,
Then he can go;
The others run and taunt me still,
Waving capes, oh what a thrill,
Chase them around this sandy circle,
Having fun, creating cheers,
They are drinking cokes and beers;
Then, a monster comes to view,
Shall I chase him, he's something new?
Heavy garments guard his sides,
I must take some stronger strides;
Something pierces me so deep,
The pain inside, it makes me weep,
I can't take this I must attack,
Blood is gushing from my back;
Deeper still he drives his spear,
But my men friends, they are drawing near,
I will pull away from him,
Play with those who shout Ole;
They all want to play with me,
Oh the pain, the pouring blood
I'll be alright,
Men are good;
Three of them walk up to me,
To ease the pain, I know they are kind,
Then more pain, deep in my side
Thrusting shafts of steel in me,
Men I trusted, can this be?
Two more men, they come at leisure,
Inflicting pain, is this their pleasure,
Oh! what have I done to them,
To displease them, once again,
Such fun we had in fields of green,
This sandy circle is obscene?
Once again, the capes they flutter,
Alright, I'll chase them, just as before,
Perhaps a treat,
Will be in store;
But stop the pain I try to say,
My whole life blood is ebbing away,
Pumping out from back and shoulder,
Is the pain to make me bolder?
Enough of this, I need to rest,
But they still cheer, I'll do my best,
Warn them off, I don't want to play,
By the way it is Sunday,
Christians they are, all of them,
Do they love their fellow men?
Crosses dangle from their necks,
And prayers they say to their creator,
For him to make them come out greater,
So much pleasure, they derive,
Don't they understand, I am alive?
I'm weaker now, I'm cold and tired,
They still wave capes, just like a child,
I'll try some more, but I just stand still,
The crowd are screaming, kill, kill, kill;
A broad sword is thrust into me,
Oh this pain, why should it be?
Men I trusted with my life,
They knew to them I meant no harm,
I would not hurt,
Their leg or arm;
As I fall, they watch me shudder,
Don't they know, I loved no other;
All my life I trusted you,
And in a few minutes, fifteen or twenty,
You made my life seem oh so empty,
You puzzled me and hurt me so,
Are you content, I don't think so?
Wow! That is a great poem, Mathos. Who wrote it?
Letty wrote:Wow! That is a great poem, Mathos. Who wrote it?
Yours truly Luscious Lips Letty.. My first real attempt.
Well, I am speechless. That is really good. Was this in the original writing forum? That's where is should be, honey.
This is the only reply that I have made today that didn't give me an error message. Weird, Mathos.
I did not read the rules, obviously it has been moved along, I am interested in any interest it may create. xx
It is in the original writing forum, Mathos. I am truly impressed. I especially like the point of view as told from the bull. Well, keep it up, Brit. <smile>
Thank you for those kind words Luscious Lips Letty.
Much appreciated, I'm toying with a similar one about an unwanted child, but it seems a bit sloppy, I am not happy with it yet.
Sometimes, Mathos, we are inspired, but often we must think things through. I will tell you about my incident with a bull sometimes.
I look forward to that Luscious Lips Letty, it appears nobody else is interested in my poem though. Not to worry, there are more important things in life. I would have like some comments either way though. Perhaps; time will tell.
Mathos, since Cavfancier died. It is difficult for me to gain inspiration. The last poem that I wrote was about my husband. I think it's the same all over this forum.
Just a small contribution.
While walking on the family farm, leading my wee children up the hill, I heard a snort of grave proportions. I turned to see Rollo, the bull in residence; head down; pawing the earth; challenging me for being in his territory. I didn't even have to make a choice. I told the children to get behind me and I picked up a broken limb. I looked that bull straight in the eye and I swear to you, I think he sensed that I was a mother ready to die for my children. He kept his head lowered and watched me with ferocious eyes. I told the kids to run, and I slowly begin to back off. We managed to get under the fence. Then and only then did I start shaking as reality set in. Then, Mathos. I ran like hell. <smile>
For what it's worth dear Mathos I enjoyed your poem indeed...
for me a good poem stirs ones emotion's, and I loved the view point from the bull as well...well done.
Thank you very much ladies, extremely kind of you.
Luscious Lips Letty, I admire your courage with the bull, it must have been quite a traumatic experience for you.
KiwiChic, I am honoured at having stirred your emotions.. :wink:
Well, Mathos. For the first time your poem inspired me write again. Perhaps you, too, ought to try edgarblythe's spontaenous poetry thread, buddy.
Maybe at the back end of the year Luscious Lips Letty, the nights are drawing out nicely now, I never see much point in missing long summer nights. By the time we reach June it will still be daylight at 10.30 pm. It is nice simply to sit out on a relaxing garden chair, feet up, a beer or two and watch the world go by.
ah, yes, Mathos. I used to do that in my Florida room. I'm afraid, Brit, that the rest of the world has gone by with last year's hurricane season. Let's hope that this summer in Florida will be different.
Yes, you had it extremely bad! Hope everything is ok for you this year, it must be rather irksome wondering if your roof is going to be blown off or worse?
Get real Mathos.
They are hoping the roof is going to be blown off so they can claim some added extras off the insurance.
How old are you?
The ones who have their premiums up to date.