Secret Exposed

I've written a song or two, but only in poem form and I am very inexperienced in songwriting.
Albeit, I think a song is simply a form of poetry with more repeats, refrains, etc. etc.

^yeah, basically, but since i listen to so much music, i for some reason feel its easier to critique them. but that may just b in my head. im inexperienced also. this is only my 2nd song. lol. but keep writing. :p

Hey, for only your second song that was pretty darn good

^thanx. its alright, but id like to get much better. i think i kinda ruined ne thing i had going with "pet alligator" though. oh well. ill get it back.

I like your lyrics rockguitarist7

^thanx.

I enjoyed this a lot. Well done!

^thanx. now all i have to do is write 1 that can compete. lol. its proving much harder than i thought. i guess i kinda lucked into this 1.