are my lyrics ok

hurricane

the flame was in your hand
you decided to burn my city
i’m stuck with the ashes
it won’t move, like my heartbeat
nothing gets rid of your smoke
it haunts me like your sarcastic jokes
you left me with this pain
you blew through me like a hurricane

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Hit me one two three four
I’ll still beg for more
Don’t take mercy, im all yours
hit me, once twice, three times
manipulate my mind
i wonder what life is like
without you in mine

verse 2
i made the bed
i have to lie in it
what’s wrong with my head?
my decisions leave me with regret
the covers suffocate me
i’m eternally bleeding
you left me with this pain
you blew through my like a hurricane

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bridge
if i cared about myself
i would of cut all ties
but i clearly don’t
cause i still put up with your lies
don’t want to be alone
you’re all i know
this hurricane is holding me hostage
the aftermath is so exhausting

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