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Neverending Haiku chain: Part 2

 
 
The Anointed
 
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Reply Wed 6 Nov, 2024 09:05 pm
@Lash,
and scout out each trail
Which all lead to the great war
Then there will be peace.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Wed 6 Nov, 2024 10:22 pm
@The Anointed,
then there will be peace
after profit's gone from wars
the children will live
Lash
 
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Reply Sat 9 Nov, 2024 10:38 am
@edgarblythe,
The children will live;
captains of the forest paths,
dappled by the sun.
The Anointed
 
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Reply Sun 10 Nov, 2024 12:25 am
@Lash,
Dappled by the sun
shining through the laced curtains
The rooms swirl with spots
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 10 Nov, 2024 09:43 am
@The Anointed,
the rooms swirl with spots
as tigers eat their trainers
then all is silence
The Anointed
 
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Reply Sun 10 Nov, 2024 04:11 pm
@edgarblythe,
Then all is silence
While all around the storm brews
As dark clouds gather.
The Anointed
 
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Reply Mon 11 Nov, 2024 08:03 pm
@The Anointed,
As dark clouds gather
all the people then prepare
For the de-struct-ion.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Mon 11 Nov, 2024 11:09 pm
for the destruction
you need one big asteroid
goodbye dinosaurs
The Anointed
 
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Reply Tue 12 Nov, 2024 04:47 am
@edgarblythe,
Goodbye dinosaurs
Once the Most-High in creation
Now crawl in the dust.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Tue 12 Nov, 2024 09:23 am
@The Anointed,
now crawl in the dust
roll off to oblivion
but leave the chickens
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Lash
 
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Reply Tue 12 Nov, 2024 03:45 pm
But, leave the chickens
to flutter up to their roost
and crow our folly
The Anointed
 
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Reply Tue 12 Nov, 2024 04:15 pm
@Lash,
And crow our folly
So all know and un-der-stand
That we are to blame.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Wed 13 Nov, 2024 04:44 pm
that we are to blame
is it not the real issue
or that we don't learn
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Lash
 
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Reply Wed 13 Nov, 2024 06:26 pm
Or, that we don’t learn…
We move, fast, brash, unthinking.
Measure twice, cut once.
The Anointed
 
  1  
Reply Wed 13 Nov, 2024 11:01 pm
@Lash,
Measure twice, cut once
And hope that twice was enough
And the cut was right,
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Wed 13 Nov, 2024 11:11 pm
@The Anointed,
and the cut was right
but the specs they had been changed
fell the edifice
The Anointed
 
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Reply Thu 14 Nov, 2024 02:21 am
@edgarblythe,
fell the edifice
As the stones of the temple
collapsed all around.
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Lash
 
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Reply Thu 14 Nov, 2024 01:12 pm
Collapsed! All around,
the King’s men, scattered, scurried;
like a kicked ant hill.


edgarblythe
 
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Reply Thu 14 Nov, 2024 01:17 pm
@Lash,
like a kicked anthill
the politics uprooted
by the angry mob
The Anointed
 
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Reply Thu 14 Nov, 2024 05:28 pm
@edgarblythe,
by the angry mob
Of those brainless id-i-ots
The wrong man was hung.
 

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