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Neverending Haiku chain: Part 2

 
 
Lash
 
  1  
Reply Thu 15 Feb, 2024 06:33 pm
@The Anointed,
You will find safety
in the weightless tumbling fall.
You just have to jump.
tsarstepan
 
  2  
Reply Fri 16 Feb, 2024 10:53 am
@Lash,
You just have to jump.
Your destination will be
determined by chance.
Lash
 
  2  
Reply Fri 16 Feb, 2024 02:49 pm
@tsarstepan,
Determined by chance:
he held the door open, and
she stopped, unblinking.




(Not sure if unblinking is a word, but I was there and she did not blink)😂

tsarstepan
 
  2  
Reply Fri 16 Feb, 2024 03:10 pm
@Lash,
She stopped, unblinking.
The stars in the moonless sky
begged her for comment.

~
Unblinking is a great word.
Lash
 
  1  
Reply Fri 16 Feb, 2024 03:25 pm
@tsarstepan,
Begged her for comment!
Shouted rude claims, yet she strode
in stony silence.






The Anointed
 
  1  
Reply Tue 20 Feb, 2024 03:57 am
@Lash,
In stoney silence
She watched as the blinking stars
Fell down to the earth
The Anointed
 
  1  
Reply Sat 24 Feb, 2024 06:58 pm
@The Anointed,
Fall down to the earth
Rising upward once again
Cleansed by the hot flame.
0 Replies
 
Lash
 
  1  
Reply Wed 24 Apr, 2024 07:40 pm
Cleansed by the hot flame
of his prose, her cheeks flushed pink.
McCarthy. Cormac.
edgarblythe
 
  3  
Reply Thu 25 Apr, 2024 07:15 am
@Lash,
McCarthy. Cormac.
And no country for the weak
Blood Meridian
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Reply Thu 25 Apr, 2024 11:13 am
@edgarblythe,
Blood Meridian
Longitude and latitude
of Western novels.
The Anointed
 
  1  
Reply Thu 25 Apr, 2024 04:19 pm
@tsarstepan,
Of western novels
And books of jilted lovers
What more do I need
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Reply Tue 7 May, 2024 10:07 am
@The Anointed,
What more do I need?
A burlap sack for my clothes
and gruel for foodstuff.
The Anointed
 
  1  
Reply Tue 7 May, 2024 07:28 pm
@tsarstepan,
And gruel for foodstuff
Is neither healthy nor good
Better to eat steak.
tsarstepan
 
  1  
Reply Wed 8 May, 2024 08:05 am
@The Anointed,
Better to eat steak:
swordfish steak, ham steak, beef steak.
A carnivore's feast.
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Reply Thu 9 May, 2024 09:28 am
@tsarstepan,
a carnivore's feast
all but the beaks and the feet
includes fat and grease
The Anointed
 
  1  
Reply Thu 9 May, 2024 04:28 pm
@edgarblythe,
includes fat and grease
Also with a great increase
Of Cod Liver oil
T-1000
 
  1  
Reply Tue 24 Sep, 2024 11:46 pm
@The Anointed,
of cod liver oil
and blood clotting side effects
best in small doses
edgarblythe
 
  2  
Reply Wed 25 Sep, 2024 05:53 am
@T-1000,
best in small doses
that general psychosis
let us not to war
Lash
 
  1  
Reply Mon 7 Oct, 2024 01:09 pm
@edgarblythe,
Let us not to war
march against those who, like us,
crave a life of peace.
0 Replies
 
Lash
 
  1  
Reply Wed 6 Nov, 2024 07:20 pm
Crave a life of peace.
Draw your personal mind map
and scout out each trail.

 

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