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Neverending Haiku chain: Part 2

 
 
tsarstepan
 
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Reply Sun 2 Jan, 2022 07:09 pm
@n0tarobot,
Those who can no more
fish stars from the night sky and
pull down schools of fire
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 2 Jan, 2022 07:23 pm
@tsarstepan,
pull down schools of fire
fishes at a barbecue
roasted nice and brown
The Anointed
 
  1  
Reply Mon 3 Jan, 2022 08:10 pm
@edgarblythe,
Roasted nice and brown
It will feed all the people
Who live in this town.
n0tarobot
 
  1  
Reply Mon 3 Jan, 2022 09:43 pm
@The Anointed,
Who live in this town
Never stop by snowy woods
To watch the quiet.
The Anointed
 
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Reply Tue 4 Jan, 2022 12:34 am
@n0tarobot,
To watch the quite, four syllables.

To watch the quite clouds
Gliding across the heavens
Like majestic swans.
n0tarobot
 
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Reply Tue 4 Jan, 2022 12:09 pm
@The Anointed,
I was using "quiet," a 2-syllable word meaning "calm" or "low noise." I was using it a little creatively, since people don't usually think of watching quiet. I'm not sure how you were using "quite" but that's your choice.
The Anointed
 
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Reply Tue 4 Jan, 2022 04:14 pm
@n0tarobot,
Quote:
I'm not sure how you were using "quite" but that's your choice.


If you had read the first five syllable line of my previous Haiku you would have known how I use the word "QUITE" I do not say 'Qu--ite' but 'Quite', one syllable.

Like maj-est-ic swans
Glid-ing a-cross the wat-ers
So do my words glide...... Not gil-ide
The Anointed
 
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Reply Tue 4 Jan, 2022 06:20 pm
@The Anointed,
My apologies, you were correct, the word "quite" can be a two syllable word, sorry about that mate.
n0tarobot
 
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Reply Tue 4 Jan, 2022 08:10 pm
@The Anointed,
I goofed once, you goofed once--we're even. Smile

But did you not notice that the word I use is spelled Q U I E T? You keep writing Q U I T E. The last two letters are switched.
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n0tarobot
 
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Reply Tue 4 Jan, 2022 08:19 pm
@The Anointed,
Back to haiku...

Like majestic swans
The... no, I am now afraid
I will make a goof.

Smile
The Anointed
 
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Reply Tue 4 Jan, 2022 08:29 pm
@n0tarobot,
I will make a goof
But without absolute proof
I say to you "POOF'

used to describe a sudden disappearance.
"once you've used it, poof—it's gone"
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Lash
 
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Reply Sat 12 Feb, 2022 11:16 am
@n0tarobot,
n0tarobot wrote:

Who live in this town
Never stop by snowy woods
To watch the quiet.


To watch the quiet
Fireflies sparking in the night
A cool breeze rustles the grass
The Anointed
 
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Reply Sat 12 Feb, 2022 03:22 pm
@Lash,
Quote:
To watch the quiet 4 Syllables
Fireflies sparking in the night 7
A cool breeze rustles the grass 7


Breeze rustles the grass 5
And whispers through the tall trees 7
How I love the breeze 5
tsarstepan
 
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Reply Sun 13 Feb, 2022 06:34 am
@The Anointed,
How I love the breeze
a late-season Nor'easter
blankets the whole world.
The Anointed
 
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Reply Sun 13 Feb, 2022 02:56 pm
@tsarstepan,
Blankets the whole world
In a freezing sheet of white
And now comes the night
The Anointed
 
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Reply Sun 8 May, 2022 05:19 pm
@The Anointed,
And now comes the night
With the darkness descending
Things vanish from sight.
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Lash
 
  1  
Reply Sun 8 May, 2022 07:17 pm
Things vanish from sight:
honeysuckle, broadleaf grass
Can I bring it back?
The Anointed
 
  1  
Reply Sun 8 May, 2022 07:38 pm
@Lash,
Can I bring it back
That felling of love I had
When she was with me?
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Lash
 
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Reply Mon 9 May, 2022 09:56 am
When she was with me,
she coiled in the shaft of sun,
beneath the window.
tsarstepan
 
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Reply Mon 9 May, 2022 04:54 pm
@Lash,
Beneath the window
lies some seeds in their newly
bedded jardiniere.
 

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