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Please, help correct/ parallel structures

 
 
Daryna
 
Reply Thu 10 Sep, 2020 05:20 am
Dear Grammar Experts,

Could you help proofread the following passages:

1. Considerable intellectual potential, unique opportunities for research and a group of talented scientists provide for an opportunity to focus on priority areas of forensic science and criminalistics. Thanks to ongoing progress, active research wok, qualitative forensic activity, fruitful international cooperation the Institute fulfills new goals every year, and gaining a new status is one more step for its development. Obtaining such a great status is a worthy recognition of the merits of a couple of generations forensic experts and criminalists, all of those who devoted their lives to the forensic science and criminalistics formation, their strengthening, development and promotion in our country and at the international level, and will inspire professional and creative team for further achievements.

2.I believe that the role of the Archives of Criminology and Forensic Sciences scientific journal is fundamental as it is published in five languages, that helps domestic science integrate into the international scientific space, and our scientists and practitioners share experiences, personal views and scientific judgments.

3.I am sure a further period of scientific existence of the publication will be productive and will bring significant benefits to current domestic forensic practice, contribute to the development of criminology and forensic science, to the formation of an adequate level of professionalism in forensic science institutes specialists and in our other colleagues and partners. We are making considerable efforts to ensure it.
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bobsal u1553115
 
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Reply Thu 10 Sep, 2020 05:11 pm
Remove 25% of the words. This looks more like a show case for your vocabulary.

Are you composing a "mission statement"?
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