Human Nature

so true
Your poem is awesome. I have felt that way so many times, alone in a room filled with people. Please keep posting.

I like it. Vague enough that you might have to read it twice or thrice, but definitely understandable. I think me, you, and a lot of people have that feeling sometimes of being alone in the crowd.

I think that vagueness invites those who are interested to take a closer look. If you just skim a poem that is a little vague, you probably miss the meaning. Only the people willing to search will find your meaning (ooooo, this could possibly be a pseudo deep review? lol).

Anyway, if you get a bored minute check out my poem at http://www.able2know.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=57225&highlight= and feel free to review it.

I love the simplicity of this poem, Bella.
It cuts right to the heart of the matter. I feel it.
Good job.

Yep let's make that 4 votes for the positive - good effort Bella - although I have to agree with Quidne that at first glance it doesn't GRAB you. But if you actually read the words not skim then yeh it's a very good description