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Becoming Darkness

 
 
Reply Tue 17 May, 2005 01:34 pm
A cold black night
Frozen in the abyss that is my mind
Not a star in sight
Just a stretch of endless black
At first it fills my heart with sorrow
Then a rush of joy replaces it
I embrace the eternal darkness
And it embraces me
I dance with the shadows
And our sorrow intertwines
The dark spirit enters my soul
And my heart becomes heavy
So heavy, it drags me down
I scream for the darkness to catch me,
Cradle me as it once did,
But it can't,
I can't be saved by the darkness
Because I've become it
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neologist
 
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Reply Wed 18 May, 2005 09:34 am
being vs. nothingness
we remember the nothingness of before
remember it led to the light
entering the new nothingness
will not bring us back
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Wed 18 May, 2005 09:55 am
Hehe i like this, nice images

I especially like:
"I dance with the shadows
And our sorrow intertwines"
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wildflower92490
 
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Reply Wed 18 May, 2005 01:42 pm
Thank you! And Neologist....what the heck?
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neologist
 
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Reply Wed 18 May, 2005 06:14 pm
First things I thought when reading. If I missed the point, it wouldn't be the first time. I'm superficial by nature.
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