ETHERIC MATRICES

I read this last night and when it started out i somehow thought was going to be more of a serious poem. Not saying you're not a serious poet This made me laugh and made me think. It has a nice feel about it - i kinda want to turn it over in my hands and look at it some more!!

Thanks, Bekaboo. After reading your poem Today, I began to realize that I'm quite incapable of revealing my inmost thoughts in the way you have done. I lament that. I applaud it in you.

Hehe *grins* believe me it's an unfortunate 'talent' - i only develop it after / during being VERY upset or VERY mad. On the plus side i have major exams soon so i spend a lot of my time very upset or very mad so i'm not doing too badly!!

Keep practicing - i've used poetry as a way to get my emotion on paper and out of my head since i was 12... practice makes perfect!! Well not quite yet But i've certainly improved!!

Great use of words and rhythm along with an interesting plot.

Thanks, Agent 99

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Bravo Neo! i am humbled by your mysteries. LET THE DREAMS FLOW...

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