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ETHERIC MATRICES

 
 
Reply Mon 25 Apr, 2005 10:59 pm
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As I was saying

The plasma changing at each plane
So, if perhaps you are insane
Compulsive personality
Obsessive to absurdity
And gullible; It is an aid
In making sure that I get paid
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Wed 27 Apr, 2005 10:19 am
I read this last night and when it started out i somehow thought was going to be more of a serious poem. Not saying you're not a serious poet Razz This made me laugh and made me think. It has a nice feel about it - i kinda want to turn it over in my hands and look at it some more!! Razz
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neologist
 
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Reply Fri 29 Apr, 2005 12:11 am
Thanks, Bekaboo. After reading your poem Today, I began to realize that I'm quite incapable of revealing my inmost thoughts in the way you have done. I lament that. I applaud it in you.
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Fri 29 Apr, 2005 12:29 am
Hehe *grins* believe me it's an unfortunate 'talent' - i only develop it after / during being VERY upset or VERY mad. On the plus side i have major exams soon so i spend a lot of my time very upset or very mad so i'm not doing too badly!!

Keep practicing - i've used poetry as a way to get my emotion on paper and out of my head since i was 12... practice makes perfect!! Well not quite yet Razz But i've certainly improved!!
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99white99
 
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Reply Fri 29 Apr, 2005 09:36 pm
Great use of words and rhythm along with an interesting plot.
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neologist
 
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Reply Tue 17 May, 2005 09:44 am
Thanks, Agent 99
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AngeliqueEast
 
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Reply Mon 23 May, 2005 03:17 am
Clapping
99white99 wrote:
Great use of words and rhythm along with an interesting plot.



Yes indeed, clapping!
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RexRed
 
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Reply Wed 6 Jul, 2005 09:54 pm
Bravo Neo! i am humbled by your mysteries. LET THE DREAMS FLOW...
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RexRed
 
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Reply Wed 6 Jul, 2005 10:52 pm
Re: ETHERIC MATRICES
neologist wrote:
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As I was saying

The plasma changing at each plane
So, if perhaps you are insane
Compulsive personality
Obsessive to absurdity
And gullible; It is an aid
In making sure that I get paid


I was an old rock...
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