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ETHERIC MATRICES

 
 
Reply Mon 25 Apr, 2005 10:59 pm
It really scares me when I feel
Plasma's force ethereal
Compulsion from the spatial orb
My very being will absorb

And so I hired an exorcist
He claimed to have a different twist
He'd send a message in a sphere
Of white light that the spooks might hear

Ok, I said. But every time
You fail I get so much more slime
It's getting so I hate the tricks
Which rid this etheric matrix
Of astral crud, flotsam, and dross
One even stole my dental floss

No problem when you've got the tonic
To rid the house of things chthotonic
The spherical abyss, you see,
Responds to astral energy
Which often leaves a psychic trail
Leads us through the celestial veil

The plasma changing at each tier
(?'Scuse me while I slug this beer)http://web4.ehost-services.com/el2ton1/beer.gif

As I was saying

The plasma changing at each plane
So, if perhaps you are insane
Compulsive personality
Obsessive to absurdity
And gullible; It is an aid
In making sure that I get paid
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Wed 27 Apr, 2005 10:19 am
I read this last night and when it started out i somehow thought was going to be more of a serious poem. Not saying you're not a serious poet Razz This made me laugh and made me think. It has a nice feel about it - i kinda want to turn it over in my hands and look at it some more!! Razz
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neologist
 
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Reply Fri 29 Apr, 2005 12:11 am
Thanks, Bekaboo. After reading your poem Today, I began to realize that I'm quite incapable of revealing my inmost thoughts in the way you have done. I lament that. I applaud it in you.
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Bekaboo
 
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Reply Fri 29 Apr, 2005 12:29 am
Hehe *grins* believe me it's an unfortunate 'talent' - i only develop it after / during being VERY upset or VERY mad. On the plus side i have major exams soon so i spend a lot of my time very upset or very mad so i'm not doing too badly!!

Keep practicing - i've used poetry as a way to get my emotion on paper and out of my head since i was 12... practice makes perfect!! Well not quite yet Razz But i've certainly improved!!
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99white99
 
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Reply Fri 29 Apr, 2005 09:36 pm
Great use of words and rhythm along with an interesting plot.
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neologist
 
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Reply Tue 17 May, 2005 09:44 am
Thanks, Agent 99
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AngeliqueEast
 
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Reply Mon 23 May, 2005 03:17 am
Clapping
99white99 wrote:
Great use of words and rhythm along with an interesting plot.



Yes indeed, clapping!
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RexRed
 
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Reply Wed 6 Jul, 2005 09:54 pm
Bravo Neo! i am humbled by your mysteries. LET THE DREAMS FLOW...
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RexRed
 
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Reply Wed 6 Jul, 2005 10:52 pm
Re: ETHERIC MATRICES
neologist wrote:
It really scares me when I feel
Plasma's force ethereal
Compulsion from the spatial orb
My very being will absorb

And so I hired an exorcist
He claimed to have a different twist
He'd send a message in a sphere
Of white light that the spooks might hear

Ok, I said. But every time
You fail I get so much more slime
It's getting so I hate the tricks
Which rid this etheric matrix
Of astral crud, flotsam, and dross
One even stole my dental floss

No problem when you've got the tonic
To rid the house of things chthotonic
The spherical abyss, you see,
Responds to astral energy
Which often leaves a psychic trail
Leads us through the celestial veil

The plasma changing at each tier
(?'Scuse me while I slug this beer)http://web4.ehost-services.com/el2ton1/beer.gif

As I was saying

The plasma changing at each plane
So, if perhaps you are insane
Compulsive personality
Obsessive to absurdity
And gullible; It is an aid
In making sure that I get paid


I was an old rock...
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