I am rewriting a song and your comment will be appreciated: The banner of liberty waves against wind

The second line should have been:
The song of victory is sung loudly.

We are singing for our beloved motherland:

'Liverty' of course a missp

But some of us--few apparently-- would like some context. You say it's rewrit; but from what, your own or some classic somewhere outa lit

Thank you guys.

Now the edited version is:

The Banner of Liberty

The banner of liberty waves against the wind,
The song of victory is sung loudly.
We are singing for our beloved motherland:
That She walks proudly toward prosperity.
We are singing for our beloved motherland:
That She walks proudly toward prosperity.

Now I post second stanza. Your comment will be highly appreciated:

Climb over high mountains,
Cross over great plains,
Stride over the roaring Yellow River
and Yangtze River!
This vast and beautiful land,
Is our loved hometown.
The heroic people have stood tall!
We are united as one;
We love each other;
We are firm as iron.

Sorry Dale. Please use Standard English. Because nuances are vital for the thread.

Ori you're absolutely right and my apolos

Nobody had mentioned it, but we presume you're aware that 'Liverty" is a misspelling. However, some of us a2k participants reading your posting--and judging from the paucity of responses to your OP, not many of us feel this way--would appreciate it if you would provide context, that is, some background: For instance where the original verse came from; if it was one you had written some time in the past or whether it might be part of a classic; and if the latter, that is, classic, where we might find the entire verse, for instance if you'd provide a link that might open a file containing the entire verse

Guys, fellas, am I alone hee

Now, Ori, regarding your second stanza, I would'a writ 'beloved'. However doing so might interrupt rhythm

https://quizlet.com/10897813/poetry-flash-cards/

...at which I'm awful

But if rhythim isn't needed, I'dve omitted the second ''River.' Guys, fellas, where y'all

Thank you Dale.
Liverty is a typo.
It's weekends here. I'll be back. See you later.

Liberty's flags wave in the wind
That victory's songs salute.