Is this sentence grammatically correct?

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Jara, a tribal in Andaman is on the run from cruel captors who are after his tribe. In his efforts to escape, he gets rescued and taken to Chennai by Kavya, an uptown girl who initially comes to the island to celebrate New year with her friends. At first there were too many misunderstands between them as Jara doesn't know her language. After some time, she starts to train him and Kavya slowly gets attracted to him and starts liking him. Does Kavya choose to stay with Jara for rest of her life?

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@BSG87,

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Jara, a tribal in Andaman

Tribal is an adjective that describes things not people, like a tribal headdress. As Jara is male I would use tribesman.

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At first there were too many misunderstands

Misunderstandings, not misunderstands.

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After some time, she starts to train him

This is grammatically correct, but it's vague, train him as what, and for what purpose? If she's educating him you'd be better off saying she starts to teach him about..... (21st Century living. (?))

Other than that it's OK.

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