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Thu 18 May, 2017 02:21 pm
The challenges I face when I try to buy clothes online are not being able to try them and not being able to feel them.
How can I shorten the first part of the sentence?
The challenges of buying clothes online are...
The challenges in buying clothes online are...
The challenges when buying clothes online are...
The challenges with buying clothes online are...
Something else?
Thanks very much.
@Doubtful,
A couple listed might work okay, but usually the article used with challenge is
to.
So, I would select "The challenges to buying clothes online are..."
@Doubtful,
It's not 'try them', you say 'try them on'. If you want to shorten the sentence why repeat 'not being able to'?
How about:
Not being able to try the clothes on and not being able to feel them are two challenges I face when buying clothes online.
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