I haven't looked into your other writings threads -- I just happened in here -- so I don't know about these others. I will be looking for Super Pickle and Fair Tale. When I do read them, I'll post so you know I've read them. If I don't in the next couple of days, please remind me, OK?
Nothing wrong with needing to have someone deal with your punctuation, etc. Somebody has to have the inspiration, somebody (else) has to do the technical stuff to make sure it is written correctly.
As for the girl who got pregnant... don't be mean. You aren't a bad boy and that's NOT a funny story. The poor girl was mixed up and now she's paying for it. Do you know the song "I'm the guy who didn't marry pretty Pamela Brown"?
Quote:I'm the guy who didn't marry pretty pamela brown
Educated, well-intentioned, good girl in our town
I wonder where I'd be today if she had loved me too
Probably be driving kids to school
(chorus)
I guess I owe it all to pamela brown
All of my good times and all my roamin' around
One of these days I might come ramblin' through your town
And I guess I owe it all to pamela brown
I've seen the lights of cites and I've been inside their doors
I've sailed to foreign countries and I've walked upon their shores
I guess the guy she married was the best part of my luck
She dug him 'cause he drove a pick-up truck
(chorus)
I don't have to tell you just how beautiful she was
Everything it takes to get a country boy in love
Lord, I hope she's happy 'cause she sure deserves to be
Especially for what she did for me
(chorus)
It's time for me to be off, but I want to say that I admire your feelings about serving your country. I also admire that you stay out of the political threads because, as a life-long military brat, I still believe what my daddy told me -- the military should not be political. He didn't even think they should vote while on active duty. Hope I haven't offended you with the radical ideas I have posted. *I* am trying harder to stay away from political threads (so nobody better set me off as I'm pissy when I get my back up).
