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Is this correct sentence?

 
 
Reply Wed 26 Oct, 2016 09:58 pm
Here is the memo which first memo is incorrect and second memo I fix it,but still I think in second version there is some mistake.
I wanna check second version grammatically and punctually thx.


first version(incorrect):

Im working in a It company for lasr6years,Im support manager. Managing domains register resellers,hosting resellers (like whm,plesk,directadmin..) education applications to customers and fixing there app problems

second version(corrected)

I'm working in a IT company for lesser than 6 years.
I'm support manager.
Managing domains register re sellers , hosting re sellers such as whm , plesk ,direct admin etc.
Education applications to customers and solving the application problems.

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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2016 06:15 am
I have been working at an IT company for less than 6 years as a support manager. My job includes managing domains, registering re sellers, hosting re sellers such as whm and plesk, direct administration duties and providing education applications to customers and solving the application problems.


What is whm and plesk?
mayaphenomenal
 
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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2016 10:12 am
@PUNKEY,
It's about website hosting
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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2016 11:07 am
@mayaphenomenal,
first version, sheer guesswork:

I've been working in a It company for the last 6 years as Support Manager, handling domains-register resellers and hosting ones like whm, plesk, directadmin., etc. I've also applied education applications to others' customers, thereby fixing their app problems

second version(corrected still again, by guesswork)

I've been working in a IT company for less than 6 years, where I'm Support Manager processing domains-register resellers and hosting those such as whm , plesk, direct- admin, etc, and other such customer-education apps

mayaphenomenal
 
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Reply Thu 27 Oct, 2016 09:23 pm
@dalehileman,
first of all thx for you concern and what would I do to come out of guesswork?
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Reply Fri 28 Oct, 2016 11:59 am
@mayaphenomenal,
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thx for you concern
Not at all May, was challenge indeed

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... to come out of guesswork
No offense May; but it might require quite a bit of context
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