Well, Cav. You know by now that the poem is at its pinnacle. Wonder if eversaugust will approve?
I'm just waiting to see his work. His last post in the thread he started was actually quite well-stated. He's in Japan, so the time-shift is a problem in terms of posting for him. I have no doubt he will follow up, and I have in fact, garnered some amount of respect for his opinion on criticism, given that he did indeed restate it in a diplomatic way. I would welcome his comments.
