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Locally Family-Owned and Operated Since <Year> - Ok?

 
 
snstfd
 
Reply Thu 18 Aug, 2016 09:50 am
Locally Family-Owned and Operated Since <Year>

Is this okay? I like the sentiment as a company tagline but not certain if it is grammatically correct.

I would appreciate it if respondents were limited to those with a high level of grammar expertise.
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Region Philbis
 
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Reply Thu 18 Aug, 2016 09:59 am
@snstfd,

how about --

Family-Owned and Operated Locally Since <Year>
snstfd
 
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Reply Thu 18 Aug, 2016 10:27 am
@Region Philbis,
I like it but the subtly in the message is not that the store is locally operated, it's that the family ownership is local. They live in the community. I worry moving locally in the message may impact that meaning.
Region Philbis
 
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Reply Thu 18 Aug, 2016 10:34 am
@snstfd,

to me it implies that the company is both {family-owned and operated} locally...
snstfd
 
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Reply Thu 18 Aug, 2016 10:55 am
@Region Philbis,
I'm gonna go with it. Thank you!
ehBeth
 
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Reply Thu 18 Aug, 2016 11:40 am
@snstfd,
I'd take the family component out of the phrase and use it elsewhere in an advertising piece.


Locally owned and operated since <Year>


Leaving family in leads to a very clunky read (and interpretation).
snstfd
 
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Reply Thu 18 Aug, 2016 11:49 am
@ehBeth,
I agree but the ownership part doesn't Wink
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