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Mon 4 Jul, 2016 07:57 am
Please advise me whether the following sentences are correct. Many thanks.
We refer to the above enquiry case referred by your office on 12 June 2016 and we clearly recognize the suggestions on the addition of sports facilities at our clubhouse from the District Mayor. To well represent our department's stance on the suggestions, enclosed are our past response to a similar type of enquiry case for your reference.
Your suggested messages always have far too many words.
We refer to the above enquiry referred by your office on 12 June 2016. Enclosed is our past response to a similar enquiry.
@Tes yeux noirs,
Tes yeux noirs, thank you for your correction.
@chowbarry,
Chow no offense whatever but where do you get all these clumsy sentences
@chowbarry,
Our past response to a similar type of enquiry is for your reference.
@dalehileman,
dalehileman, some of these sentences are extracted from the government correspondences.
@chowbarry,
Chow, wouldn't you know it
@chowbarry,
"That" government needs to hire a person who understands English grammar.