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Sunlight and Shadow

 
 
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Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 02:58 pm
I've done nothing but meddle with the spontaneous poems that I wrote here, recently; I hate it when this happens, but I'm completely poetically-impotent from April until about September... it frustrates me so.

I would be really interested to read something of Panzade. Which reminds me, I ought to take a shot at writing up this related poem in prose...

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Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 03:00 pm
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gustavratzenhofer wrote:
Will we dance with roses in our mouths?


O, yes! If you want so! Although I find that Morris dancing is better with carnations, there's nothing better than variety.

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Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 03:00 pm
Letty wrote:
fortune, see what you've started? You are the muse of amazing....

Later folks.


See you soon, Letty. Be kept well.

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Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 03:18 pm
A muse? The most I've ever aspired to is amuse.

Drom, thanks much for the praise (incoherent or otherwise). Very encouraging!

Gus, what can I say? Such subtlety and nuance... I'm speechless.
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Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 03:37 pm
Gus And The Hooker

by Panzade

I spilled the chicken,burned the wine
but never mind
She kissed my forehead as if I were blind
And in the darkest Autumn in the clear moonlight
I caught my breath and heard her sighs
I held her sighs
Against my heart, wild so wild
In the Autumn night
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Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 03:43 pm
Beautiful, Panzade! When I saw Gus' name in the title I thought for sure it was going to have something to do with a goat, but....

Anyway, I must bid adieu for now!
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Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 03:52 pm
Adieu, notre amie!

I liked that, Panzade. You made Gus' encounters into something beautiful. I hope to see more of you here.


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