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Opinions on correct use of "emitting".

 
 
Reply Mon 30 Nov, 2015 03:52 pm
Hi Everyone. I'm looking for views on, "The guard didn't speak, but stood there emitting fear."
My reading of that would be that the guard was scared, or in fear, rather than the prisoners, which is the opposite of the intended meaning. A more appropriate sentence would be, I think, "The guard didn't need to speak as his very presence induced fear among the prisoners."
What do you guys think?
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Ragman
 
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Reply Mon 30 Nov, 2015 03:56 pm
@Pablo Fanque,
The meaning of the first sentence indicates the guard was fearful: however, your second sentence indicates the prisoners were fearful. That's pretty confusing and contradictory so I don know how to properly advise you because the context is unclear.

My take on the correction of the first sentence would be: "The guard didn't speak, but stood there feeling fearful."


or

"The guard didn't speak, but stood there acting fearful."
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InfraBlue
 
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Reply Mon 30 Nov, 2015 04:23 pm
The guard didn't speak, but stood there inducing fear.
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roger
 
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Reply Mon 30 Nov, 2015 04:38 pm
It could well be that the sample sentence is exactly right. A guard could very well be in fear of his prisoners.
InfraBlue
 
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Reply Mon 30 Nov, 2015 04:58 pm
@roger,
Pablo Fanque said that that is the opposite of the intended meaning, if I read him correctly.
Setanta
 
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Reply Mon 30 Nov, 2015 05:16 pm
Certainly emitting means giving off or giving out--and therefore the sentence in the OP means the guard was giving off fear.

For the benefit of Mr. Kite
There will be a show tonight on trampoline
The Hendersons will all be there
Late of Pablo Fanque’s Fair—what a scene
Over men and horses, hoops and garters
Lastly through a hogshead of real fire!
In this way Mr. K. will challenge the world!




Pablo Fanque really did exist--he was a famous circus performer, an equestrian, and the owner of the most popular circus in Britain for 30 years. He was also the first black owner of a fair or circus in Britain, if not actually the only black circus owner.

https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/c/cb/Pablo_Fanque.jpg
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roger
 
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Reply Mon 30 Nov, 2015 06:53 pm
@InfraBlue,
He said "My reading of that. . . ." That is his interpretation, and without further context, I am suggesting he is mistaken.
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Glennn
 
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Reply Mon 30 Nov, 2015 07:16 pm
@Pablo Fanque,
I'm not sure if the word, evinced, is appropriate, but if so:

Though the guard didn't speak, he nevertheless evinced an air/aura of fear.
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