@Ragman,
Thanks for your helpful feedback, Ragman. OK, the full context was a college report in which I was talking about my past work experience. This section read:
'I dressed smartly every day and maintained professional behaviour. My hope was that they would see that I am a serious individual who has a strong interest in business.'
I'm confused because, yes, it's a report on past activity, but it's describing my current traits (serious and businesslike!). It reminds me of the "one-tense back" rule; I wonder if that applies?