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Please help me check the grammer

 
 
Kavin
 
Reply Wed 15 Apr, 2015 04:25 am
Hi, friends. Here is my a part of speech. I want know if they are right.
Since we were born, we have already been surrounded by advertising which relates to all aspects of our lives.Advertising seems to have become one part of our lives which was not weird.

Thank you!
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infodavidwatson
 
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Reply Wed 15 Apr, 2015 09:03 am
@Kavin,
You, Should join to improve your grammar skills more and more.
Chris Mackenzy
 
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Reply Thu 16 Apr, 2015 01:51 pm
@Kavin,
The sentence seems to be perfectly fine.
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McTag
 
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Reply Thu 16 Apr, 2015 02:42 pm
@Kavin,

Quote:
Since we were born, we have already been surrounded by advertising which relates to all aspects of our lives.Advertising seems to have become one part of our lives which was not weird.


From birth, we are surrounded by advertising which affects all aspects of our lives. Advertising seems to have become one part of life which is normal and is accepted.
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roger
 
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Reply Thu 16 Apr, 2015 02:46 pm
@infodavidwatson,
infodavidwatson wrote:

You, Should join to improve your grammar skills more and more.


Why a comma after the word 'You'? Is there some reason for capitalizing the S in 'Should', and what do you think the word 'join' mean? I do not think you will be advising me on grammar.
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