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A single word for replacing the sentence.

 
 
Shikhar623
 
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Reply Tue 14 Apr, 2015 10:04 am
@all thanks for response.
Let me elaborate my problem a bit.
I am writing a satire article , In which US prez gives orders to the US army to attack N.Korea openly. But mid air the missile failed and fell in the Pacific. Now this failure needs to be justified. Therefore prez announces "US was successful in testing a Device that could blow up a missile mid air."
Now I am finding hard to choose a word for the Title of the post.
Can I write, " US prez justifies the missile failure with an innovative technology "?
I feel it could be better.I
Please suggest any title.

PS: No offence to either US or N.Korens.
boomerang
 
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Reply Tue 14 Apr, 2015 10:17 am
@Shikhar623,
I think the word you're looking for is "spins"

Quote:
In public relations, spin is a form of propaganda, achieved through providing an interpretation of an event or campaign to persuade public opinion in favor or against some organization or public figure. While traditional public relations may also rely on creative presentation of the facts, "spin" often implies disingenuous, deceptive and/or highly manipulative tactics.[1]
Ragman
 
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Reply Tue 14 Apr, 2015 10:22 am
@boomerang,
I'm agreeing with Boom
izzythepush
 
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Reply Tue 14 Apr, 2015 10:40 am
@Ragman,
In this context yes.
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Shikhar623
 
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Reply Tue 14 Apr, 2015 11:16 am
Thanks for the word.
So is this correct? " US prez Spins a missile failure with an innovative technology"
Is that realy a descriptive title? Please suggest any other title if you have in your mind.
ehBeth
 
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Reply Tue 14 Apr, 2015 11:23 am
@Shikhar623,
Shikhar623 wrote:
US prez spins missile failure


that's long enough for the title of the article
layman
 
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Reply Tue 14 Apr, 2015 11:37 am
@ehBeth,
Quote:
that's long enough for the title of the article


Yeah, Beth, and the remainder of the title is not only unnecessary, but seemingly wrong, if I understand it. There is no "innovative technology," there is merely a lie, which falsely creates the impression of new technology.

So any (unnecessary) subtitle should say something more like this, it seems:

"claims failure was a test of an innovative technology"
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boomerang
 
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Reply Tue 14 Apr, 2015 12:18 pm
@Shikhar623,
I think you'd need to say he spins it as something...

US Prez spins missile failure as technological triumph!




layman
 
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Reply Tue 14 Apr, 2015 12:54 pm
@boomerang,
Quote:
US Prez spins missile failure as technological triumph!


Yeah, there ya go. That sounds good to me, too.

Although I must say that I'm not completely enthralled by the word "spin" here. I think we used to claim that our U-2 spy planes, when spotted deep into USSR territory, were only there due to pilot error. That was not "spin," in my usage of the word. It was merely a bald-faced lie intended to deny the obvious, and everyone knew it. We just weren't gunna fess up, that's all.

To me "spin" usually carries the notion of some "plausibility" with it. Maybe that is here in this case, but maybe it aint (and would be quickly and easily debunked).
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Shikhar623
 
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Reply Tue 14 Apr, 2015 05:23 pm
Thank you all for going through all the pains.. 😁
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