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Homemade Cartoons

 
 
rcleary171
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 04:28 pm
@chai2,
I appreciate all feedback. I like complements and I like suggestions and my skin is thick enough to take criticism. Though I have been doing this off and on for about four years I still consider myself an amateur with a lot to learn. Thanks to everyone for all the comments and feedback!
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rcleary171
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 04:38 pm
@chai2,
Hi Chai2,

I don't believe I have the talent, patience or interest to pursue a graphic novel. But, one never knows what the future will bring. As for my humor I get a wide range or responses from very funny to not funny at all. I just learn from trial and error, keep plugging on and accept the fact that humor is a challenge. But most of all I just love doing this. It's a great (and cheap) hobby.
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roger
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 04:38 pm
@rcleary171,
rcleary171 wrote:

. . . converting the art to monochrome pretty much takes all the color out.


I hadn't thought of that.

I could not care less if you've been published, or not. I do wish you success.
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rcleary171
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 04:40 pm
http://i1306.photobucket.com/albums/s565/rcleary171/Cartoons/Thinking_zps780e40ca.jpg
rcleary171
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 04:41 pm
http://i1306.photobucket.com/albums/s565/rcleary171/Cartoons/Guppies_zps034cd185.jpg
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rcleary171
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 04:43 pm
http://i1306.photobucket.com/albums/s565/rcleary171/Cartoons/NoPictures_zpsbe3a2cb5.jpg
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rcleary171
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 04:46 pm
http://i1306.photobucket.com/albums/s565/rcleary171/Cartoons/Toy%20Soldiers/04ClosedStation_zpsb426e3b9.jpg
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chai2
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 05:05 pm
@panzade,
panzade wrote:

Dearest chai2.
You're the last person I'd expect to get defensive here.



Sorry if I came across to you as defensive. I don't feel that way.

I had gotten the impression this was a totally warm and fuzzy thread, and nothing says medicore like everyone agreeing and telling someone, especially an artist or comic, how super double plus good they are.

I figured someone, i.e. the OP, might appreciate and think about some well intended, constructive critisism.





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chai2
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 05:07 pm
@Ragman,
Ragman wrote:


I see nothing to critique about his artwork. It's quite good. Hence a positive critique. However others choose to express their opinion is their choice.


Again, and yet one more time ragman, I did not critique his artwork. I don't think the humor is what it could be.

Yes, others can certainly express their opinion. I thought that went without saying.
ossobuco
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 05:15 pm
@rcleary171,
I get that, I'm a painter. On the other hand, I started out drawing, etching, and all that and and have always liked a lot of black and white movies and photos.
But I get you not wanting to go there, especially since your color drawings are, uh, super.
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 05:29 pm
@rcleary171,
sigh, so good..
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neologist
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 05:54 pm
So what if not all are side splitting funny. You have created a niche. Your work is clean and original. Definitely on par with Associated Press fare. Keep at it. I believe we all here are rooting for you.
hingehead
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 06:28 pm
@rcleary171,
Hey, did you know First Dog On The Moon has been used as a nom de plume by cartoonist Andrew Marlton for the best part of a decade?
http://www.theguardian.com/profile/first-dog-on-the-moon

Wondering if it's coincidence, meme, or homage.
rcleary171
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 06:30 pm
@hingehead,
No - I did not know that. Thanks for the link.
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rcleary171
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 06:31 pm
@neologist,
Thanks Neologist!
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rcleary171
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 06:32 pm
More fish!

http://i1306.photobucket.com/albums/s565/rcleary171/Cartoons/Cartoon154_zps5304459f.jpg
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rcleary171
 
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Reply Mon 29 Sep, 2014 09:56 pm
http://i1306.photobucket.com/albums/s565/rcleary171/Cartoons/Cartoon121_zps088a5001.jpg
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rcleary171
 
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Reply Tue 30 Sep, 2014 05:37 am
http://i1306.photobucket.com/albums/s565/rcleary171/Cartoons/Cloud-Copy_zps857ef718.jpg
Ragman
 
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Reply Tue 30 Sep, 2014 06:34 am
@rcleary171,
This is just my need to tweak because I like your work. I would edit the last part of the last sentence thusly:"...I have 'til Monday to get off of her cloud."

The Birthday-Dead-fish one is way too long and misses the mark comedicly.
In general , with these cartoons, shorter and briefer is better in comedy.
Ragman
 
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Reply Tue 30 Sep, 2014 06:44 am
@chai2,
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Again, and yet one more time ragman, I did not critique his artwork.

And, once again, I never said that you did.
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I never addressed you, thought about nor intended my comment about you. I certainly never saw you being critical of his art work, either.
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