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Which is correct?

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jisimnimark
 
Reply Tue 23 Sep, 2014 08:22 pm
Can you help me phrasing this sentence?

Would you use:

Let it melt on your tongue, a symphony of flavours are waiting to be discovered.

OR

Let it melt on your tongue, a symphony of flavours await to be discovered.

OR

any other suggestion?

Thanks for your help.

Mark
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MontereyJack
 
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Reply Tue 23 Sep, 2014 11:01 pm

Let it melt on your tongue, a symphony of flavours await to be discovered--NO
await discovery
usery
 
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Reply Wed 24 Sep, 2014 02:02 am
@jisimnimark,
How about:

Whet your tongue on a symphony of flavours, discover the difference between a cliche and a ....

jisimnimark
 
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Reply Wed 24 Sep, 2014 03:23 am
@usery,
thanks for your suggestion.
I'm not sure about this to be honest. I want something flowy ... yet something straight to the point.
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jisimnimark
 
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Reply Wed 24 Sep, 2014 03:24 am
@MontereyJack,
Thanks for the correction MontereyJack! Smile
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