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Wed 1 Jan, 2003 11:04 pm
I'd like to suggest that we identify the sort of piece we are posting here. Nothing elaborate, just give the title, followed by a colon and either the word "Poem", or "Prose". That way the visitor/reader will know what they are clicking on. I really do like much of the poetry published here, but my main interest is in prose. To be able to find the pieces of most interest would be useful. Once people started identifying the sort of post they are making, it would just become the way things are done.
I have already been doing it. Makes sense, since some don't read poetry and some might not want fiction or essays.
~*Darts Through Hearts*~
you told me lies
you made me cry
but now those tears are done
I hope you had your fun
you are now about to break the heart of one close to me
but I already know that u cannot see
I will not let you damage her heart
or stab her only feelings for you with a dart
you hurt me and now it's about to be
My Best Friend
leave her alone
don't throw no stones
you broke my heart
pleez dont break another
just stay with her forever
if you disrespect her like you did to me
she will leave you ,you soon will see
i see her coming, shes mad
because I told you not to make her sad
she tells you "goodbye"
and you say "why?"
she says "because you were just being you
and I hate that too
cuz you are disrespectful to me
I do not know why that u cannot see"
so "goodbye" again she says to you
you realize now that you are through
I told you not to break her heart
but instead of listening,you threw the dart
Stumble It!
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