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Mon 11 Aug, 2014 04:31 pm
I am writing a C.V for my graduate school admission. I would like you to check the following sentences if they correctly deliver the meaning between the parenthesis. Thank you so much.
• 2012: Top 1 Computer Science undergraduate student ( When I got my bachelor degree I got the highest GPA among all computer science department graduates at that semester )
• 2012: Fifth place research paper in "The Third Scientific Conference for students of higher education in K.S.A.", Medina, Saudi Arabia ( our graduation project won the fifth place in that conference )
• 2011: Top 5 student among the college of Computer Science and Engineering ( I was given an award for being one of the top student during that year)
• 2007: Top 2 secondary school Graduate country-wide level with an accumulative average of 99.97% ( I got the second highest accumulative averages after graduating from high school among all students in my country at that year)
• Taught and supervised laboratory work of three advanced courses: Compiler Design, Knowledge-Based Applications, and Assembly Language ( Is it correct to say " laboratory work " when I was responsible to teach the practical part of these courses, all the lectures were on the computer lab)
• Academic advisor for 25 student ( is it advisor or adviser?)
• Chair of the Student Activities Committee ( I was the head of the student Activities Committee )
• 2012: Participated with a graduation research paper in "The Third Scientific Conference for students of higher education in K.S.A." Medina, SA
• Leadership: leaded a graduation project team over two semesters ( is semesters is the correct word?)
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Thanks in advance
@naalbadi,
You wrote,
Quote: • 2012: Top 1 Computer Science undergraduate student ( When I got my bachelor degree I got the highest GPA among all computer science department graduates at that semester )
• 2012: Fifth place research paper in "The Third Scientific Conference for students of higher education in K.S.A.", Medina, Saudi Arabia ( our graduation project won the fifth place in that conference )
Here's my .02c revise:
2012: 1) Top Computer Science student with highest GPA upon graduation. 2) I participated on the fifth place research paper on "The Third Scientific Conference for Students of Higher Education at K.S.A" in Saudi Arabia.
You wrote,
Quote:• 2011: Top 5 student among the college of Computer Science and Engineering ( I was given an award for being one of the top student during that year)
My .02c revise:
2011: Ranked in top 5 students in the college of Computer Science and Engineering.
You wrote,
Quote: • 2007: Top 2 secondary school Graduate country-wide with an accumulative average of 99.97% ( I got the second highest accumulative averages after graduating from high school among all students in my country at that year)
My .02c revise:
2007: Placed in the top two graduates from secondary school in my country with a cumulative average of 99.97%.
Q:
When did the following activities occur?
• Taught and supervised laboratory work of three advanced courses: Compiler Design, Knowledge-Based Applications, and Assembly Language.
• Academic advisor for 25 students.
When and where?
• Chair of the Student Activities Committee.
When and where?
• Led a graduation project team over two semesters.
What project?
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