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d13g9
 
Reply Mon 10 Mar, 2014 10:25 am
Hello,

I work as a buyer, and when vendor dosen't agreed with our dates i send an email scalating to my boss, like this:

" Vendor name " hasn't agreed with our pulling date.

is the sentence above correct ?
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PUNKEY
 
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Reply Mon 10 Mar, 2014 11:52 am
@d13g9,
How about:

XYZ company will not agree to the (sell, pull, shipping) date. Please advise.

d13g9
 
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Reply Mon 10 Mar, 2014 01:03 pm
@PUNKEY,
Thanks a Lot PUNKEY for the reply Smile

When i am sending this email, i have already received a reply from the vender on our Open Order Report. So that is why i am writing:

XYZ company had not agreed with our pulling or push out date.

could you tell me if the sentence above is correct ? is the grammar ok ? is the sentence understandable ?

thanks and best regards.
McTag
 
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Reply Mon 10 Mar, 2014 04:16 pm
@d13g9,

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is the sentence understandable ?


Yes, it is understandable.
Alternatively, you could write something like, "The vendor cannot meet our required date(s)."
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Mon 10 Mar, 2014 04:54 pm
@d13g9,
D13, it's "doesn't agree" or "hasn't agreed"

I wonder if you don't mean "escalating email"

"Vendor name" leaves some of us wondering. Could you mean for instance "firms identified in the 'Vendor Name' column"
d13g9
 
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Reply Tue 11 Mar, 2014 06:17 am
@dalehileman,
Thanks for the feed back Dale Smile

Firms in the vendor name columns would be suppliers, like: Wurth, KCE and etc...

And you are right about "escalating email", sorry my mistake.

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