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The term dyslipidemia converges several metabolic measures related to blood lipids

 
 
Meduza
 
Reply Sun 22 Dec, 2013 06:40 am
is that correct?
i have seen some definitions of the word CONVERGE, not sure whether i am using it in a correct way. the ms word has underlined it green.

hi, btw, i am ne where. writing a final year project and dont have a proof reader
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Reply Sun 22 Dec, 2013 07:25 am
The Word grammar checker probably placed a green underline under "converges" because converge is usually considered to be an intransitive verb - things converge, you don't converge things. Consider using "combines".

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Reply Sun 22 Dec, 2013 07:52 am
I wrote:
Consider using "combines".

...or "covers":

Quote:
The term 'dyslipidaemia' covers a range of lipid abnormalities, but of greatest concern is the so-called 'atherogenic profile'

http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2757682/
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Reply Sun 22 Dec, 2013 02:17 pm
@Meduza,

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i am ne where.


You are new here? Take more time, calm down. Smile Wink
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