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Sat 2 Nov, 2013 12:32 pm
I'm looking for general input on the structure of the following sentence:
"Outside of my family, you are the only three people to whom I actually care what happens."
@roundar,
Dar, you might omit the "of" and the "people"
And maybe the comma too
@dalehileman,
I'd keep the comma but I think you're right about the two omissions Dale.
@tsarstepan,
Thanks Tsar for your support, a rare commodity hereabout. And yes the comma is a matter of choice and circumstance
@roundar,
I am one to whom the accusation is that I actually don't care for I actually care.
Outside my family I only care what happens to you three.
Use know who yous are.
@Miss L Toad,
Quote:Use know who yous are.
Miss, more likely, Us'n knows who youse are.
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