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Reply Fri 30 Aug, 2013 05:32 pm
Please suggest of a clear grammatical explanation of the errors on this statement.

Please be advised that during our investigation, we were able to browse several pages of your domain. And the pages were working fine.


Any correct alternatives will be appreciated.

Thanks!
Jay
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dalehileman
 
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Reply Fri 30 Aug, 2013 05:58 pm
@jaytheseer,
Grammatically Jay it looks okay thought I might have written

During our investigation we were able to browse several pages of your domain and they were working fine

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Brandon9000
 
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Reply Fri 30 Aug, 2013 07:01 pm
For some reason, you put a period in the middle of your sentence.
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jaytheseer
 
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Reply Fri 30 Aug, 2013 07:17 pm
@jaytheseer,
Thank you for the responses. The error has been identified and an alternative sentence was provided, but can someone please provide an EXPLANATION for this error? A particular rule that was violated perhaps. Thanks.
trying2learn
 
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Reply Sat 31 Aug, 2013 04:10 am
@jaytheseer,
"Conjunctional clarifications
To find out the rationale (if any) for the ban on introductory ands (and buts, and even becauses), let’s go back to basics: what’s a conjunction and what role does it play?

A conjunction is a word such as and, but, because, while, until, although, or if.
Conjunctions are a class of word used to link sentences, clauses, phrases, or other words."

http://blog.oxforddictionaries.com/2012/01/can-i-start-a-sentence-with-a-conjunction/
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JTT
 
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Reply Sat 31 Aug, 2013 10:05 am
@jaytheseer,
I don't see any grammatical errors, Jay.
dalehileman
 
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Reply Sat 31 Aug, 2013 10:17 am
@JTT,
Me neither
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