Rate My Lyrics

dude man. like i said, serious talent. did u say u were in a band? if u r, i wanna hear it. man your good. makes my stuff feel little

I'm not in a band... i can't even sing that well...

i could record the tune.. but i don't have any music and my voice sounds like crap

Shattered Light

Verse 1:
I'm ******* scared of what you'll say
What are we suppossed to be?
Tell me, what you see
Through the shattered light

Skewed **** on the walls
blurred signs of what we are
Toxic look of fright...
Through the shattered light

Pre-Chorus:
Just show me what you need to see.
Just show me what you need to be.
Just show me, a new way!!

Chorus: Be where I am.
Are you just my friend?
Tell me who i need to be?
Just to see you again

Can i be for you.
The only thing that gets you through
To another day
just so you can be there for me

Verse 2:
The sound of silence is all we knoe
Every morning we stay still
The whole time,
I wish i was talking to you

Everyday we leave
all we want to say
is anything, but now words came to me

All i can do -
Is turn and see
The look on your face

I fell into Yesterday
"I fell into yesterday"

I see your reflection in the window
Where it came from, I'll never know
I see you in my dreams
Staring back at me
All i know is , it's not real

I hear your voice on the phone
telling me, the opposite
of what i wanna hear
I heard you all the time
your voice fades away from me
all i know is, it's not real anymore

My memory is what i wanted it to be
of the world before it was destroyed
the dreams of nights are gone
all thats left is the memory

hamsters, movies, and the sounds
music in the background
sitting on your bed
I learned the dreams of someone else

As i look at the sky that
person won't die, from
my mind. They remain
a lost dream to me

My memory is what i wanted it to be
of the world before it was destroyed
the dreams of nights are gone
all thats left is the memory

Hanging at the mall
leading me
where i didn't want to be
but you knew, i'd go anyway

As i walk in the woods
clarity comes to mind
your part of me, is not gone
your in me for good

My memory is what i wanted it to be
of the world before it was destroyed
the dreams of nights are gone
all thats left is the memory

As i drift through the days
nothing can replace my memories
of the days, that jumped off the page

I'll never be the same
I'm forever changed
But those days are just a distant memory

My memory is what i wanted it to be
of the world before it was destroyed
the dreams of nights are gone
all thats left is the memory

Dying Deaths of Dreams
Dying Deaths of Dreams

Verse 1:
Read a book, be smart,
no one knows that but me
Its your life, a secret world
you gave it all to me
Tell a friend, do what you do
End your life, who will care
I will
Be what I wanted you to be

Chorus:
Remember the night...
All i wanted was to be there for you
Remember the time...
When everything was good
Remember me and how I was
Because now your gone
And all i have is your music and your memory

Verse 2:
You felt this way The pain for years
You seem so happy, even though your always dressed in black
I wanna tell you, I realize your gothic, but that never meant anything to me
you were always just you to me
your mystery made me dig deeper
to be near you meant to know you
but to never understand you is the
folly of being different

you suffer, I never knew you did
on surface you were real, but not unhappy
but that can't be true
I feel stupid, because I knew everything else
But now its time to go back to your world
Where nothing is it what it seems
and your real to me

Verse 3:
You know, what it means to feel
Like the world is crashing, and to not be in control
I finally understand, what sets you apart,
It's more than i know
Tell me why you hated me, I never understood,
but just give me a clue

Verse 4:
Your room is your world
I've seen the bed you sleep in
The sounds you rock too
Even inside your head
But never again,
will I understand the thoughts
that changed you
the ideas that made you feel upset

Verse 5:
Depression owns you
Depression killed you...See me
Be what I wanted you to be
Be a friend, be there
Be a stranger in my land

Need help
Hey every1 this is my first time doing this(im a male 13 years old ) i really want to be a singer but i as wondering if any1 could give me some tips on the song i wrote or anything about my song if so thanx.

Back To The Begining

Verse 1:
I spent days and nights in my bedroom
trying to write the perfect song to you.
I'll write a song a day, but i know you wont
like it anyway.
I dont see why i spend all night trying to
think of this song 4 you.

Chorus:
So now im Right back where i started
with the words youve heard a million
times before right back at to the begining.

Verse 2:
I look at you and i see you looking at me.
I dont know what to do about you girl.
Girl im stuck on you and i need you,
but u played me now its all over now
and im alone and feeling so down with out
you.

Chorus:
So now im Right back where i started
with the words youve heard a million
times before right back at to the begining.

Verse: 3
You took ur love away from me and now
i dont know what to do without you.
Every day when im not with u, im missing
you like crazy girl.Im nothing without you.
I really miss you but i finally relized that i
need to move on.

Chorus:
So now im Right back where i started
with the words youve heard a million
times before right back at to the begining.

Verse: 4
I cant belive i put my trust in you, i thought
u loved me. You told me you loved me and
you wouldent do me wrong but i guess things
dont always go the way u think it will.

Chorus:
So now im Right back where i started
with the words youve heard a million
times before right back at to the begining.

and theres more but ya....

marsalienattak70 awsome songs!!!!!!!! your really good

thannks... someone record my songs... please

Was that a cry for help?!!

no... just a question

Hi all! its the first time i post on this forum.. but i have some lyrics i'd like you all to look at! i wrote them by my self (on paper than computer...)
i listen all kind of music soo just tell me how you feel it

There's maybe mistake... just tell me if you find some lol! (i write english but its not my birth language!)


Here's the first one :

Copyright jonhi2k3 2003-2004

-You and I-

I've been thinking a long time
Reflecting, thinking, Looking for the meaning
Of when I looked into your eye
Tell me.
Why have I been paralyzed?
I tried to rememorize that night
Always thinking about you and I
Because you're my days, my nights
You are about everything in my life….
Dont get aways i need you by my side
Don't tore my heart, consume my soul
Tell me that you'll Stay beside me so then
I'll find the peace i've always wanted

To much time left behind
To much time wasted asking why
So much question, whitout answer
You made me hit the floor
And then you closed the door
You left, and there is nothing left
Since this day I can't rest

It's in your eyes, each time I pass by
It's in your voice, it's burning inside
I can't escape it, it's hurt bad
You're no more beside
Some call this the faith
I tried to be the best, I did wrong
And now i've lost you, and my own
Each time I cry, Each days of my life,
I remember your eyes this night
Then I find peace and a little bit of ease.
But my heart still in pieces.

Too much time left behind
To much time wasted asking why
So much question, whitout answer
You made me hit the floor
And then you closed the door
You left, and there is nothing left
Since this day I can't rest

I close my eye
And now I am thinking of you and I
Dancing all alone this night
Why had you to leave me why!
You didn't said good bye
And now I'm wondering why
So I … let the whole thing pass me by
There is no more time wasting asking why

To..To
Too much time left behind
To much time wasted asking why
So much question, whiteout answer
You made me hit the floor
And then you closed the door.



2:

(there may still some mistake)

-Still loving you-

Baby, You make me hurl
Soo loud that they could hear me in hell
You know... I'aint bad
Aint mad
Aint sad
'til i'm by your side.

'cause Baby
I love your style
Your eyes
The way that you smile
The thing you own
The thing you do
Baby... i just wanna say that
I still lovin' you

Baby you know ! Boysz dont Cry
'Cuz they think it aint right
But for u i would do
'Cuz i dont need to be understand
'Cuz i'm a man , Your man!

Still loving you time and time again
'Cuz...

'Cuz you know how life can be cruel...
'Cuz you understand what is pain...
'Cuz you never misjudged me...
I will for ever thrust you
Will you ever thrusth me?

And running and circle i Sream
I stand and still Lovin' you

'cause Baby
I love your style
Your eyes
The way that you smile
The thing you own
The thing you do
Baby... i just wanna say that
I still lovin' you

'cause Baby
I love your style
Your eyes
The way you smile
The thing you own
The thing you do
Baby... i juste wanna say that
I still lovin' you

And this 'til my heart explode
'til i live my rise and fall
'til the end, just me and you....

Baby, i still Lovin' you....
You...
You....
You.....
(fade)

i hope to get a good mark
By the way all the lyrics i've read here are awsome

if anyone have a band and will to play it just tell me
thx for your help

Enjoy!

Friend in the Fire (the new one)

Verse 1:
Show me your writings
the thoughts that escaped
show me what you feel
it's a tough world out here

Help me, help her
she needs me, more than you do
dying slowly and silently
Just because she can't fight it
the feeling,
it hurts her, it kills her

Chorus:
Show me what it means
to be in need of a savior
I can help you
Grab my hand - don't let go
Don't slip away - from me

Verse 2:
You taught me the meaning
of living life to the fullest
she needs some like you
and now your gone

Let me show her
your scret world of decpetion
the one you gave to me,
let me give it to some-else
to help the world

Bridge:
"Your really awesome, music gets you through the day,
but when there's silence, you fall through the cracks, you need me"

Verse 3:
Look and smile like before
your world is dark -
your life needs something
let me give you the world

Verse 4:
Learn your lesson
the world is waiting for you to die
open your arms
let your heart bleed
go straight to the sky

Tears Will Fall

Verse 1:
I walk alone,
feeling nothing but numb inside
I drink alone,
feeling nothing but calm

I sit alone,
on the sidewalk of doom
I hear that voice, that burns me up inside

Chorus:
Risk it all!
in the emptiness you'll find
Your not alone...
look me in the eyes
your not alone
lonliness sets in.
tears will fall

Verse 2:
Live the Dream
It felt like a dream
Live in me, you know you always will

Don't shut me out.
Let me tell my side
Your not alone,
your world is what i want inside

Verse 3:
You never died,
You've been living breathing, and dreaming
all this time, away from me

Tommorow comes...
silence is all i hear
tommorow comes
the memory is lost

next year comes
the bride and groom are dead
what will be, never was
what was to be, never will be again

Retrogression

Verse 1:
There's nothing left...
no unfelt feeling
for the first time.
I felt nothing today

There's nothing left
nothing to hope for
for the first time
I said nothing today

Chorus:
Catch me as I Fall,
through the retrogression
everything becomes,
the nothing that it is

time passes on
not much changes
the truth is,
how it starts, is how it ends

Verse 2:
I remember the sun shining on your face,
just a dream, it's not real

I havent been on these forums in over a year!
Thursday, January 13, 2005

The Wait is OVER!!!! See wats been so much talked about song in years....lol

New Song Finally Done!!!

"The Beautiful Deception"

1st Verse

All the pain of my life,All The grief I have inside

All The Torture and the pain,Things that make me go insane

All the stupid little lies,I Jus wish you would die

End of Everything I knew,End of everything with You

Chorus

Why do you cause me all my pain?

why do you make me go insane?

Why did you care for me before?

something you werent even sure!

Why do you still want to be with me?

I Want to be free......End of everything I had

But you know i am Sad....So stay away from me

will you let me be free?

free from you...free from me..

Free from everything.........I Need!!!

2nd Verse

All the sorrow I have now,I wonder how

.....this could happen to me......

Something I didnt need.....

2nd chorus

Why do you cause me all my pain?

why do you make me go insane?

Why did you care for me before?

something you werent even sure!

Why do you still want to be with me?

I Want to be free......End of everything I had

But you know i am Sad....So stay away from me

will you let me be free?

free from you...free from me..

Free from everything.........I Need!!!

3rd Verse

Your Destruction of my life.....Everything Iv held inside

Bursting out of me.....All this rage you about to see

All your false moralities.....look wat you did to me!

End of the pride I had...But i am glad

Knowing that your dead....Everything thats gone through my head

End of your life.....look you did to mine!

3rd chorus

Why do you cause me all my pain?

why do you make me go insane?

Why did you care for me before?

something you werent even sure!

Why do you still want to be with me?

I Want to be free......End of everything I had

But you know i am Sad....So stay away from me

will you let me be free?

free from you...free from me..

Free from everything.........I Need!!!

Final Verse

your memory .....was everything to me

i want to wash it all away.....break away from all that pain

ending it with your life.....now that youve died

now enter into hell.....all the pay back that went so WELL!!

Bridge

I want to crawl in your hole!!!

I want you to burn in your hell!!!

I want you to die in my head!!

Look at the memory .....you created for ME!!!!

Final Chorus

Why do you cause me all my pain?

why do you make me go insane?

Why did you care for me before?

something you werent even sure!

Why do you still want to be with me?

I Want to be free......End of everything I had

But you know i am Sad....So stay away from me

will you let me be free?

free from you...free from me..

Free from everything.........I Need!!!

©Dark View Records

nice

2000 miles


its cold
2000miles
is very far
the snow is falling down
gets colder day by day
i miss you
i can hear children singing
you'll be back again sometime
2000 miles
isvery far through the snow
i think of you
wherever you go
i think of you
wherever you go

hey, im new to this thing
but soon im gonna be the rap king
im probably the youngest here at 14
i was born and raised from the philippines
now i live here in the US
beeing here damn i feel so blessed
my favorite thing is to play basketball
ill do all my moves and make yo ass fall
do my crossover u will be on da ground
jump ova u and ill get da rebound
go fo the fastbreak between the leg dunk
ill be so high in da sky it will look like u shrunk
thats not all i can do i can pop the three
more treys than MJ and LArry
i average about 10 assists
i pass like baron davis
i gotta go now and take a piss
now u know that im the greatest

Does anyone ever notice how the "Rate my lyrics thread" never gets any feedback.... oh well... when i have time....

These are all pretty terrible!! no creativity what so ever