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Juxtapose AND compare?

 
 
Reply Tue 26 Mar, 2013 08:19 pm
Hi All:

I have a two-part question. First, is it proper to use the word "juxtapose" as I have in the paragraph below? And, second, am I correct in writing "...athletes whose experiences we plan to juxtapose with those of other professional...."? It's the "whose experiences" and "with those of" part that I confused about.

thanks.

...they have agreed to help us recruit participants for our comparison group of athletes whose experiences we plan to juxtapose with those of other professionals, so that we can explore any similarities and differences.
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Reply Tue 26 Mar, 2013 08:44 pm
@rondogger22,
I suggest you use the word 'contrast'.

Compare and contrast often go together and in this case that would work out better. More people in a general audience would understand that word choice.
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Reply Wed 27 Mar, 2013 05:44 am
@Ragman,

I agree with Ragman, and the rest of your sentence is fine.
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