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Amanda's Dream: A poem

 
 
Reply Sun 15 Dec, 2002 02:52 pm
Beneath the silver plate,
Floating on a scented sea,
Dark-eyed wild Susans
Sway on a warm breeze.

Pale recollections dancing
Through haunted dreams
Crowd wrinkled sheets
Off of a narrow farm bed.

Awake, the grey head turns
On a tear-stained pillow
Remembering the first kiss
Before dawn in twenty-eight.

The eastern sky, not yet light,
As it was then sixty years ago.
Across the dark a shooting star
Falls into the perfumed night.

Forks and knives and empty
Cups and laughter echo, echo
Faintly down yellowing halls
Abandoned now for years.
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Rae
 
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Reply Sun 15 Dec, 2002 03:16 pm
Beautiful, Asherman. Thanks. Laughing
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chatoyant
 
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Reply Sun 15 Dec, 2002 03:52 pm
I agree with Rae. This is a hauntingly beautiful poem. You are very talented, Asherman!
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