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Part 5 Could you please proofread these sentences? I'm learning English

 
 
Reply Mon 11 Feb, 2013 01:53 pm
Part 5 Smile Could someone please proofread my vocabulary flashcards? It shouldn't take too much time for a native English speaker, and I can't proofread the sentences myself. Sad

Please suggest better alternatives for the sentences that don't seem right. I really need to learn this vocabulary for university.

Thank you!

GLEAM (v.i. & n.) A constant light, often reflection from dark surface. Thus,

when reflected it gives the impression of coming from below the surface, as for example from a well-waxed object - shoes, a car, polished wood.

This adds a connotation of richness to the description.

a) The lights of the house gleamed in the distance.

The moon gleamed through the clouds.

b) A gleaming Rolls-Royce purred by. (What does purred by mean? That the Rolls Royce is coming towards us?)

As he came into the candlelit dining-room his attention was
caught by the gleaming silverware, the gleam of mahogany,
and the gleaming eyes of the cat.

The moonlight gleamed on the quiet lake.

COMPARE:

The sunlight SPARKLED on the water (the water is moving - as
when there is a light wind on the lake).

The moonlight gleamed on the water (the water is still - and
dark).

Her hair SHONE in the sunlight.

Her hair gleamed like a gold helmet.

As she turned her head, flecks of gold GLINTED in her brown hair. (What does this mean?)

The gleaming Rolls- Royce.

The SHINY cheap model from Detroit. (SHINY always has con-
notation of cheap quality.)

The SHINING new car (brilliant surface lustre - without the positive attribution of quality and price implicit in gleaming).

IDIOMATIC

His little eyes gleamed with malice (really malicious. not teasing).

His eyes gleamed with amusement. (Disagreeable amusement.
Cf. the gleaming smile of the crocodile.)
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Reply Tue 12 Feb, 2013 12:35 pm
@EnglishPractice88,
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a) The lights of the house gleamed in the distance.
No because we usu think of a gleam as as reflection. Sun reflected from a window might be described as gleaming

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The moon gleamed through the clouds.
No, we definitely don't think of it as gleaming. We might say it shown or shined, or beamed; sometimes peeked; less common, glowed

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b) A gleaming Rolls-Royce purred by. (What does purred by mean?……..)
A purr is the sound made by a contented cat

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The moonlight gleamed on the quiet lake.
Probably okay 'cause it's a reflection but my Better Half likes "glowed" better

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The sunlight SPARKLED on the water
Okay

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Her hair SHONE in the sunlight.
Okay

As she turned her head, flecks of gold GLINTED in her brown hair. (What does this mean?)Her hair contains flecks, that is small flakes, of some foreign substance

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Her hair gleamed like a gold helmet.
BH advises "Helmet" as derogatory, while we (at least I) think of a gleam as more nearly uniform

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His eyes gleamed with amusement.
BH says she'd prefer they flashed or sparkled

I'd have said "in amusement" but maybe that's just me again..

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(Disagreeable amusement. Cf. the gleaming smile of the crocodile.)
Not necessarily disagreeable but maybe facetious, flippant, or playful

I'd have said "in amusement" but maybe that's just me again..



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