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oristarA
 
Reply Sat 19 Nov, 2011 11:32 pm
Well, i forgot to learn english yesterday night. I have to learn 3 hours english today, as well as a report needed to be finished within today.
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My first attempt of editing:

Well, I forgot learning English last night. So today I have to study English for three hours, and have to finish a report as well.

I'm not satisfied for the editing.

Give me a better one, please.
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oristarA
 
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Reply Tue 22 Nov, 2011 07:33 am
@oristarA,
Let it come to the surface of waters.
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Reply Tue 22 Nov, 2011 07:39 am
Well, I forgot to study English last night. I have to study English 3 hours today and need to finish a report.

oristarA
 
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Reply Tue 22 Nov, 2011 08:58 am
@PUNKEY,
PUNKEY wrote:

Well, I forgot to study English last night. I have to study English 3 hours today and need to finish a report.




Perfect!
Thanks
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