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JTT
 
Reply Sat 23 Apr, 2011 06:38 pm
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Original sentence:
Your behavior illustrates that these things simply didn't take for you or your entire family was as delusional as you've shown yourself to be.

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Ionus: Whats wrong with that sentence, you great English speaker you !


Why don't you go ahead and explain it for us all, big W writer?
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farmerman
 
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Reply Sun 24 Apr, 2011 04:53 am
@JTT,
Whoever wrote it is apparently unfriendly with punctuation. A few redactions and a comma here and there and it would make sense. Its kinda clunky though.

Who wrote it?
PUNKEY
 
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Reply Sun 24 Apr, 2011 07:44 am
What does the writer want to SAY?

Is it:

Your behavior illustrates that these things simply didn't take for you - or your entire family was as delusional as you've shown yourself to be.

JTT
 
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Reply Mon 25 Apr, 2011 03:43 pm
@farmerman,
Edit away, if you wouldn't mind, Farmer.
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JTT
 
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Reply Mon 25 Apr, 2011 03:44 pm
@PUNKEY,
Exactly, Punkey.
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