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i want to know if the sentance is correct

 
 
guru18
 
Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2010 08:27 am
my daughter is sure of getting 80 % marks and I have promised a gift - but with a rider that if she gets less than 75 % , then she will not get the same.I want to write in such a way that it must not hurt her or displease her can I write

Dear ....

In the unlikelyhood of your not getting 75 % marks , then you will not get the gift this month .


or write

In the likelyhood of your not getting 75 % marks, then you will not get the gift this month .

Which is the correct way of writing .\

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Setanta
 
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Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2010 08:30 am
First of all, the word is spelled likelihood. Second, i rather doubt that there is such a word as "unlikelihood."

Try this:

"In the unlikely event of your not getting 75 % marks , then you will not get the gift this month."

There is a stock phrase "in the unlikely event of . . ."--i'd say, use that.
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laughoutlood
 
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Reply Fri 12 Nov, 2010 11:33 pm
@guru18,
Dear ...

We love and miss you so much. Good luck with the studying. All our best. Go for it.

( slightly changed sentence )
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