Reply Wed 3 Mar, 2010 01:58 pm
You brought the plague.
Please take this plaque!
These cats are vague.
It's kind of whack.
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The messes you've made.
Built a big shack?
Now you must fade,
All in a crack.
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Go in the shade.
Stay off this track.
Cry tears of jade.
You won't be back.

Shishkabob!

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Reply Wed 3 Mar, 2010 02:44 pm
@mister kitten,
Its cool,
Would call it 'the shack the bob built'.
But it is unecessary and rude of me to offer changes to an overall cute little ditty, so will stop.
Thanks
mister kitten
 
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Reply Wed 3 Mar, 2010 03:05 pm
@sometime sun,
sometime sun;135535 wrote:
Its cool,
Would call it 'the shack the bob built'.
But it is unecessary and rude of me to offer changes to an overall cute little ditty, so will stop.
Thanks


If a shack was a life, maybe. I like the bob part.
Shishkabob! was the first name that popped into my head. Laughing

I realized that shishkabob has bob in it. haha
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