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Confusion

 
 
Reply Thu 13 Nov, 2003 10:21 am
So many questions
so little time
Sometimes I ask
am I losing my mind?
So many decisions
I know I can't make
So much critisism
I simply can't take
I can't please everyone
Though I will always try
Sometimes I get discouraged
but i don't know why
I hate all the pressures
that are brought upon me
To many decisions
then i'd rather there be
I just can't stand it
don't know what to do
To feel what i feel
if only you knew
I'm not looking for sympathy
I just wish it would end
But I feel its a battle
that I simply can't win.

...NR
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kerver
 
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Reply Thu 13 Nov, 2003 12:02 pm
Hey LH, How's it goin? This is yet again another great poem by you. I like how it all just "fit" together. Take it easy!
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Lonely Heart
 
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Reply Sat 15 Nov, 2003 12:08 am
thanx hun i appreciate your response...
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