Sat 29 Nov, 2003 07:13 pm - Kerver i couldn't have said it better, what you wrote is so true. I guess thats why we sleep just to escape reality. Very well written. (view)
Thu 20 Nov, 2003 08:45 pm - please do justin, i wouldn't think i'd read all of that but while reading i didn't even realize how long it was, but it was worth it. I'll be looking forward to reading more of... (view)
Sun 16 Nov, 2003 12:37 am - wow! i have no idea what the pictures could possibly be. First the pictures are "mesmerizing" and the next it seems as if he's to scared, or traumatized to even speak about it. Quite... (view)
Sat 15 Nov, 2003 12:06 am - hey kerver, very simple but yet very good. Its funny how you can say so much with very litle words being used. I enjoyed it. (view)
Sat 15 Nov, 2003 12:03 am - wow! that was real good, you have a way with words placing the reader there in your mind experiencing and feeling everything that was felt for one another. i'll hope to read more of your work. (view)
Thu 13 Nov, 2003 10:21 am - So many questions
so little time
Sometimes I ask
am I losing my mind?
So many decisions
I know I can't make
So much critisism
I simply can't take
I can't please everyone... (view)
Wed 12 Nov, 2003 06:50 pm - thanx butterfly, your friends writting is beautiful and extremely truthful. Definitly had me thinking, of that girl. (view)