teacup
 
Reply Sat 13 Dec, 2008 01:07 pm
You might ask me why I left
and claim I was wrong
but let's be honest,
we don't miss each other.

Words crumble before
they reach the heart,
so don't even start
with loving complaints.

A body with intention,
with eye contact, and
honesty
would have made
a difference.

But one of us didn't give,
or perhaps receive,
leaving a gap
of irregularity.

Ah, but at last,
what is,
is meant to be.
No regrets
from me.

I live
in solidarity.
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Reply Sat 13 Dec, 2008 04:23 pm
@teacup,
You might like to put all of your beautiful poems on the same thread. It saves bandwidth. Just a thought.
Peace
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teacup
 
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Reply Sat 13 Dec, 2008 05:11 pm
@teacup,
Great suggestion. I was wondering the best way to handle that. Cause this approach could get out of hand....
Thanks nameless. Smile
nameless
 
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Reply Sun 14 Dec, 2008 01:00 am
@teacup,
teacup;37868 wrote:
Great suggestion. I was wondering the best way to handle that. Cause this approach could get out of hand....
Thanks nameless. Smile

You're welcome. Just passing what was once suggested to me. It made sense.

A poem, for you;

"A word is not a word
until it's spoken;
a heart is not a heart
until it's broken!"
-Book of Fudd
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