Sat 13 Dec, 2008 05:11 pm - Great suggestion. I was wondering the best way to handle that. Cause this approach could get out of hand....
Thanks nameless. :) (view)
Sat 13 Dec, 2008 01:21 pm - the beauty of poetry, is there is hardly a proper way.
but i also agree with musicman, this poem could be strengthen by forming stanzas (which can be a lot of fun). you can put certain lines by... (view)
Sat 13 Dec, 2008 01:07 pm - You might ask me why I left
and claim I was wrong
but let's be honest,
we don't miss each other.
Words crumble before
they reach the heart,
so don't even start
with loving... (view)
Fri 12 Dec, 2008 05:16 pm - Midnight brings acceptable
madness. Trips for chips,
but really something more.
I am happy with you
and let the wine decide
this too.
Why is music, and madness
so intriguing?
Covered with wine,... (view)
Fri 12 Dec, 2008 04:55 pm - I have closed into myself
like a flower
when the sun goes down.
Or a sea anemone
when it's been touched.
I'm sitting in a corner
staying alive,
as I watch the world
flutter by.... (view)
Sun 7 Dec, 2008 12:50 pm - As far as I know, dark matter is unobservable. It is indirectly detected by its gravitational force on detectable matter (like galaxies). It was labeled as such bc scientists has an idea of how... (view)
