teacup
 
Reply Fri 12 Dec, 2008 04:55 pm
I have closed into myself
like a flower
when the sun goes down.

Or a sea anemone
when it's been touched.

I'm sitting in a corner
staying alive,
as I watch the world
flutter by.

I'd rather be sleeping.

You speak to me and
I force a few words
before slipping away.
I have nothing to say.
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xris
 
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Reply Sat 13 Dec, 2008 04:49 am
@teacup,
Should i be concerned for the poet or is it his licence ? If he makes me feel cold should i worry? The image he portrays requires me to ask ..are you OK friend?
teacup
 
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Reply Sat 13 Dec, 2008 01:01 pm
@xris,
she is okay. :yinyang:
xris
 
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Reply Sat 13 Dec, 2008 01:22 pm
@teacup,
Sorry getting your gender wrong but glad your OK..
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