William
 
Reply Mon 12 Oct, 2009 04:22 am
Do you have doubt in what you say,
As you try to convince another that comes your way.
To be a friend if you do as I say.
As it makes you angry when they go their own way.
So many do pay a price,
As they don't like to take advice,
From those who appear so nice.
As many fall into that vice, pshaw;
As they break an unjust law,
If we all could just let others be,
And what a joy we would see
As they offer all they have for free
As a gift to you and me.
If we are polite and ask permission for what we offer,
If it fits, the tears will be evidence
As it is offered to others in every sense.
If they don't ask, but tempt, show them the door
As you say to that whore, I will not pay
for that unjust law you implore.
Tell them......to go on the lam,
I'm okay, just as I am.

William:bigsmile:
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xris
 
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Reply Mon 12 Oct, 2009 05:26 am
@William,
Ide like to give you some advice but fear your lyrics will inspire you to deny. Thanks for that will..xris
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